Talk:Press release 2.0.3

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Some very minor suggestions:

>>is ready now for<<

"is now ready for" instead?

>>three months after the release<<

replace "after" with "since"?

>>OpenOffice.org is also the first office suite<<

remove "also"?

Jcausey

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