Difference between revisions of "Talk:Press release 2.0.3"
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| + | Jeff, as always, thanks for the comments. I agree with two out of three. However, I think the 'also' is worth keeping: strictly speaking, the stuff about ODF is not a feature of this release. However, Louis put it in the first draft and I don't think it does any harm repeating the message. "Also" sort of justifies including it in the PR... | ||
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Latest revision as of 19:36, 28 June 2006
Some very minor suggestions:
>>is ready now for<<
"is now ready for" instead?
>>three months after the release<<
replace "after" with "since"?
>>OpenOffice.org is also the first office suite<<
remove "also"?
Jcausey
Jeff, as always, thanks for the comments. I agree with two out of three. However, I think the 'also' is worth keeping: strictly speaking, the stuff about ODF is not a feature of this release. However, Louis put it in the first draft and I don't think it does any harm repeating the message. "Also" sort of justifies including it in the PR...
Jpmcc 21:36, 28 June 2006 (CEST)
